Feedback on Pitch.

We delivered our pitch in yesterdays lesson introducing our ideas for the opening sequence and the story. We used our story board to show the sequence explaining what shots and editing we are going to use.
We also analysed two films that inspired us for the sequence, Scum and This is England, explaining why they are significant to our film.
We got feed back on our pitch:

• It was simple an easy to film creating a smaller chance of things going wrong.
• It may need more concepts or some action.
• Using only one actor, and not using dialogue, again makes it easier to do and will create a good effect.
  
  In response to this feedback we may consider adding some action to sequence, however we are going to stick with keeping it simple as we believe it will be more effective and realistic.
  We are going to continue with the same storyline and same effects.
  
  Dan